Who was at fault !!!
The world is buzzing around,
With work load full-on,
And, I am floating in the flashback,
Feeling the heaviness of nostalgic heart,
With this book in hand,
I could relate things back in time,
Through “Those small lil things in life and love”,
I peeped in my childhood world,
Love was unknown feeling then,
Life was wonderful with a lil fren,
Life was intoxicated with happiness,
Saturated with fun and madness,
I miss you dear,
For I never found someone so near,
Those crazy talks,
Inexplicable endless laughs,
Classroom’s fun,
Those fights and recess runs,
But, today I realize feelings have slipped,
In unknown darkness it has tripped,
We have lost each other,
Who was at fault!! I still wonder.
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about 1 year ago
Wow..! I’ve read this twice over and i can’t seem to get enough of it. The nostalgic feeling it brings is truly, overwhelming. Memories Un-leashed has true meaning in this post… Keep up the good work and thanks a lot for sharing what you feel….
) The picture goes so well with this…
about 1 year ago
Oh, life changes so fast and leaves us with nostalgia. No one’s fault, it’s life, strange as it can be. Beautiful poem, I love the flow of thoughts and simplicity in this poem.
about 1 year ago
Very cool.
This question will not have convincing answer.
about 1 year ago
Thanks Camille for liking the post.
Saru, U r rite! No one’s at fault. It’s the life’s frenetic pace at work that affects..
Agree with your point Rajesh..
about 1 year ago
Beautiful words! Life would be so much more wonderful without that question, isnt it… Lovely poem, Keep writing
about 1 year ago
Thanks Arti..:)
about 1 year ago
Beautiful flow-y thoughts and words. Very nostalgic
about 1 year ago
thanks Kiran:)
about 1 year ago
how can i say, your every post is somehow connected with me, You’ll have to believe. I still wonder, who was at fault, in my life too.
about 1 year ago
Jayendra, good to know that you felt connected…Life is strange…and got to live and love it the way it is:)
about 1 year ago
may be time….may be no one…
beautiful written
Cheers!
SUB
about 1 year ago
yes.. sadness is always wonderful to read.. for it connects.. very nicely written..
about 1 year ago
Time is the culprit of this nostalgia
…. It changes, and so we do!
about 1 year ago
Well written poem with good-flow of words – showing the emptiness of heart awaiting the return .
about 1 year ago
great efforts