“Uncontrollable Ecstasy of Love”
Life has been a puzzle that I never figured out ..
For when I try to get into it, I never come out ..
I love a girl deep down from my heart, more than myself …
She plays with my emotions till she gets bored by this act of herself ..
I crave to see her from all within my soul …
She enjoys my agony coz she finds me a dolt …
Um a blockhead who walks alone in the dark,
the dipping moon and the gleaming stars gimme some of their spark ..
They pity me asking, “Does true love reciprocates this way?
“We are glad to stay single, alone, far away …
I give a gazeless stare with a baleful look on my face …
Her love though fake but it touches my heart like a wave ..
I no more wanna be a big foot stamping all over her life …
As now she detests me, my role is over for this life ..
I’ve sacrificed my happiness coz she loves someone else,
I’ve burned my existence all by myself …
Listening to this, a tear rolled down the moon’s face …
He said, “Your Love is pure, May Lord shower his grace …
Your life is not over even if your beloved is not with you,
She is your life but your life doesn’t belong to you ..
See the love and care in your Moms eye …
Fulfill her hopes before you shrink of pain
and you die.”
Oh Moon !! Stars are the witness and I promise today,
I would fight back with the pain and succeed one day ..
(Its one of my favourite)
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