THE ABSENCE
THE ABSENCE
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MOM, Thank you for being our mother,
Today there is a fragrance in our lives,
It’s the way you nurtured our souls with affection, care,
Knowledge, filial love, understanding, patience, strength,
Grace, dignity and wisdom………………………………
Thank you mom for teaching us the grace of meekness,
Humility and the joy of giving, to convey love through actions,
How to manifest presence by always being there;
Your own silent presence was so felt and so supreme.
Thank you for teaching us to put others first,
To make another’s life a little easier to live,
To put in the best efforts in whatever we do,
To face life’s battles bravely without batting a lid,
To believe, wait and hope and pray in patience.
Thank you for bequeathing to us today,
The strength to help us live with the same simplicity,
Vintage our lives with goodness and to age with grace and dignity
You were an example, Mom.
Thank you God, for giving us this wonderful woman,
Who excelled in all the roles you wanted her to play
Without you mom, its so hard……………………..
Today, we -your children all promise to always be there for each other
And for others strong and supportive as you would want us to.
We close our burning eyes,
Hoping sleep to vanquish all,
In the deep recesses of our minds,
Lies embedded a beautiful jewel-
A soul so simple, so rare
A tender heart that always cared.
A turbulent mind sketches the outline of a majestic countenance…..
Yours…………
Every wrinkle split the radiance of a thousand smiles,
A smile so sincere is stolen,
Amidst us the brightest star is fallen,
Unbelievable still now we believe,
For the grim fact lies unveiled…….THE ABSENCE
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about 1 year ago
Wonderfully expressive.
about 1 year ago
Very emotional; well written.
about 1 year ago
Wow.. I relished each and every line.. very nice dedication.. to the lovely women who chalenges God by saying creation is not just his cup of tea.. !
about 1 year ago
Very expressive and every word is deep. Everyone can relate to this poem. Great:)
about 1 year ago
truly from the heart…loved it !
about 1 year ago
Lovely piece, made me go and just say thank you to mom!
about 1 year ago
wow ! soulful poem
i loved it !
very nice expression about mom..
yes she is always great
about 1 year ago
Thank you Rajesh,Hariharan,KP,Saru,Asha,Vivaan ,Soumya and Aakash for appreciating my first novice attempt…..your comments have spurred my confidence……
about 1 year ago
No need for thanks, Nelly .. Your poems are truly wonderful and ought to be appreciated. Keep writing .. Keep up the good work
about 1 year ago
Simple, direct, sweet and emotional.
All the elements of a perfect, dedicated poem are in order, I loved this.
about 1 year ago
Thanks,Yash.
about 1 year ago
lovely….the simplicity of word makes it really enjoyable
about 1 year ago
Wonderful.
Well written Aakash.
“A soul so simple, yet so rare,
A tender heart that always cares”
That’s mom.
about 1 year ago
Thanks Sunil